After Jules eating a tasty burger I was feeling confident enough to take on The Stare. It’s my best painting yet but the expression isn’t quite right, it’s lacking intensity of the original and I’m not sure what I’m missing. Feedback?

I’m doing one more SLJ in this series, it’s time for Mace Windu. That’ll make 16 and then I’m in to paint some family members. Not sure I’ll share them here, privacy and all. But this series has me confident enough to try, I’ve learned so so much! Thank you for all the feedback, critiques, and advice!

  • ZombiFrancis@sh.itjust.works
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    1 day ago

    You have the look with the eye on the right. The eye of the left holds a more muted expression. Someone else pointed out some of the facial shadows would help, and I agree. Higher contrast around the eyes at least will help convey ‘The Stare’.

    Nice work.